Hey wow! This is really good. I'm amazed at the details in this comic already...@_@ The long shot that you used for an opening looks so cool! Nice and detailed, shows that snow is all over...it's a great start to the comic. The details in the background for the second panel too, with Sonic taking a drink, are really good as well...the leaves, shadow, and Sonic himself. He looks relaxed....until the silence is suddenly broken by Zephyer's yell I like how you mix the more realistic style with the first two panels and last panel with the more cartoon-y style of the middle three. It looks nice (I think my favorite is the cartoony Spike running as fast as he can, ). And I definitely like the last panel...nice shot of Sonic, and the details! The gloves in particular I noticed....the slight folds in the fabric, the area where the seams are meeting...I couldn't do anything like that @_x. Your lettering is pretty neat too (it looks hand done, but still straight and legible. That's something I personally have to work on in comics ).

Just out of curiosity, when you color Sonic here, what do you use? It looks like it could be computer-done because of the fading effect in the gray tone you used, but is my guess correct?

The one problem I had with this comic was that I started reading it like JAPANESE manga first, I'm a bit too used to it, I suppose, but I ended up reading this backwards and it took me a minute to figure out WHY the story seemed out of order. Hee hee.

I've read the second page too, and I like that one also. Keep up the good work! I liked this story of Netraptor's, and I'd LOVE to see it in comic form, especially when the drawings are so well done. I'll be looking forward to seeing more of these!

~Karma

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Lol Wow this looks amazing and so funny X3.I'm amazed of the details the shadowing everything O_O;;;

Many thanks! I'll have more pages up in a couple more days.

Lol, you read it in the Japanese direction, heheh....

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Looks like a wonderful promising comic.

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Lmao! very funny! I love Sonic's expressions! Hehehe

Wow, thas some high-quality Sonic comic right there! So...professional-lookin.

I love it great job . u never cease to impress me tazi

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Wow i like how this turn out you could probably get to draw in the comic if you submit it

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luv the shading. shall fave coz it's d 1st page. *faves